Music Flyer Design Process

At the start of the new term, we were set a short mini project to create a music flyer for one of the courses at college. We were given the content that suppose to be in the flyer and the sort of direction the flyer is meant to be giving the audience. The flyer that you can see on the right was created first. I thought that this was a cool design, however there was really no photos to show what the course is about or to catch the audiences eyes. 

In the flyer to the left this was my attempt at improving, I thought that it looked great, we were given the college colour scheme and type face so we could make the poster a little bit better for the use around college. I thought that the image fit quite well on the poster, but what lots of people picked up on is that the grey at the top of the page look quite dull.